I fix things that have to persuade a stranger.
A listing has seconds to convince a guest. A manuscript opening has pages to convince a reader. A dating profile has one screen to convince someone to reply. A small business website has one visit to turn into a call. This studio does that persuading work, in four practices.
Airbnb listings: audit, rewrite, relaunch
Most listings do not have a demand problem. They have flat pricing on nights that are worth different amounts, generic minimum stays, arrival wording that generates confused messages, amenities nobody has verified, and a photo order that buries the best room. The audit fixes those things in that order, and shows the comparable listings behind every pricing call.
- Listing Audit: scored report, findings ranked by impact, clear fix list$95
- Audit and Rewrite: the audit plus a rewritten title and description$200
- Full Relaunch: photo order, amenity verification, booking settings, and a 30 day night by night pricing ladder, with a follow up check 14 days later$450
Proof, not promises: read the teardown of my own Gulf Coast listing, audited like a hostile stranger would. Or start with the free Listing Audit Checklist and run the pass yourself.
Manuscripts: developmental critique for fantasy and horror
You do not need another reader telling you the book is really good and then going quiet when you ask what to fix. You need to know where readers put it down. The critique reads structure first, scenes second, sentences last: act structure, a chapter by chapter map, character arcs, continuity and motif tracking, and a prioritised fix list in the order the work should actually be done.
- Opening Pages Critique: first 10,000 words, hook assessment and top fix list$75
- Opening Critique: up to 20,000 words, structure of the opening act$250
- Full Manuscript Structural Report: full chapter map, arcs, motif tracking, sequenced revision plan (price shown for 80,000 words; longer books quoted by word count)$960
How the opening read works, and why openings fail: The first ten pages tell the editor everything.
Order the critique on Fiverr or email codymconnel92@gmail.com. Message before ordering the full manuscript report so word count and deadline are confirmed first.
Dating profiles: rebuilds and coaching
Private dating coaching plus a full profile rebuild, built for feminine bisexual men who want to date women. The work: an honest audit of photos, order, bio, and prompts; a rebuilt profile written in your own voice from your real life; and coaching on conversations, dates, and where to invest your time. No templates, no borrowed lifestyle, no invented facts, and no guarantees of matches or dates, ever.
- Profile Audit and Action Plan$75
- Full Profile Rebuild$195
- Rebuild Plus Private Coaching$345
Coaches: production and managed run coordination are available behind your own practice at wholesale. See For Coaches.
Order the rebuild on Fiverr or email codymconnel92@gmail.com to start.
Small business websites
Small, fast websites for service businesses that live on calls and quote requests. Built with modern web technology instead of a page builder, deployed on your own domain and your own hosting account, and checked live on phone and desktop sizes before delivery. You own everything from day one. The words come from you; shaping your notes into clean page copy is included at the five page tier and above.
- One Page Site$250
- Five Page Business Site, with a quote form routed to your email or WhatsApp$450
- Five Page Site, Booking Ready: guided quote flow and a second language version built from your supplied translation$750
- Launch: five page site plus Google Business Profile build plus review kit, one intake$740
- Launch Plus: the Booking Ready site plus the profile build and review kit$1,040
Email codymconnel92@gmail.com with your business name, your services, and your service area.